※1、过渡：第一段说到可笑，下面就谈不可笑——连接

　　※2、例子：商场、政府的承诺行为

　　※3、拓展：深化承诺行为的细节

　　※4、结论：同母鸡下蛋的承诺一样虚无没有价值

　　※表示性质，代替adj.=of +n。(小作文高分必杀)

　　e.g. helpful=of any help   assistant=of any assistance   good=of any good   harmful=of any harm

　　The following examples will support this point.1 In schools, a unit-exam not only declares the end of the former unit, but also acts as a reminder of the preview work for the next unit. In the business field, what a CEO needs to do at the end of a year is more than review and summarize (review and summarizing). It is the time to formulate and effective and efficient development plan for next year.2 Just turn back to the sports ground。(句号结束)although in front of the end there isn’t a real start---arrowhead, there surely exists an invisible one sprouting(appearing)in every athlete’s mind, blooming(being)the training strategy of the preparation for next competition.3

　　※1、承上启下

　　※2、举例论证

　　※3、举例的同时说明结论：终点又是新起点，正是这种心态成为下次比赛成功的技巧或策略。

　　7、判断评论

　　It is clear that promise is what you claim you can do or you will do, not what you really are or you are expected to be.1 Generally speaking, it is good and sometimes necessary to make commitment to people, but promising what you must or should do can be considered a kind of cheating.2 What the cartoon really aims at is not the funny picture itself but to criticize this popular phenomenon existing in our society.3

　　※1、既点名了本段主题：谈承诺，又是一个定义，起承上启下作用。

　　※2、自己的建议。

　　※3、再次强调“承诺”这一社会现象。

　　8、问题建议

　　Child education has become one of the most popular topics discussed not only by educational experts, but also by people in all walks(职业、行业) of life.1 The failure of child education does more harm to the development of our society and our civilization than to the children themselves. Thus, it’s high time that parents, educators and the government made concerted(共同努力的，同心协力的，conert得来)efforts to put an end to this situation.2(家长，老师和政府应该怎么做)

　　※1、引出本段主题，儿童教育的现状，用婉转的方式表达。

　　※2、本段结论：三方行动

　　In our life, what we need most is self-insurance and a proper view of challenges before us. 1 Therefore, we should bear in mind that our competitors may not be as terrible(frightening)as expected, and our painstaking efforts will pay off as long as we arm ourselves with courage and confidence.2 Only in this way can we overcome any difficulties and challenges.3

　　※1、从自己角度提出意见

　　※2、具体行动的方法

　　※3、only 表示强调，以及建议的价值。

　　9、个人选择

　　All in all, I would say that living in the city is best(better)，1 for the convenience the city offers in terms of education and work(job opportunities)；2 after all, one can always spend vacations in the country---and get the best of both.3

　　※1、选择结果

　　※2、选择原因

　　※3、总结

　　As for me, I have always led a regular life.1 By everyday exercises, I build up a strong body,2 and by reading intensively I learn to acquire a proper attitude toward life.3

　　※1、个人选择或实践

　　※2、选择带来的好的后果

　　※3、拓展

　　10、现实运用

　　As we all know, children are the future of our country, Their healthy growth has therefore become a serious concern among many people.1 It should be made clear that too much care is not love. The real love and care for them are to prepare them for the future. When faced with difficulties, they can summon up the courage and exert their strength to overcome the difficulties. When faced with fierce competition, they can employ their knowledge, skills and experience to confront with their rival.2 This is the younger generation we can expect.3

　　※1、价值体现：孩子关乎祖国的未来。

　　※2、启示：重要的原因

　　※3、寄予希望

　　2007年范文写作

　　首段：图画描述：

　　This is a series of interesting and thought-provoking pictures. A goalkeeper, who is trying hard to keep the ball from the goal, sees himself as a dwarf. What’s funnier is that the football-player, preparing to kick the ball, regards the goalkeeper as huge as the goal. The meaning conveyed by the picture is clear but profound. Both of them lack courage and confidence in front of challenges。

　　中间段：寓意象征+举例说明

　　The majority of people would agree that everyone may feel challenged when a powerful rival appears in his/her mind. What divides them into successes and losers is their attitude towards confidence。(We can easily find the equivalent of the topic discussed here in our surroundings。)We, undergraduates girding ourselves for the NETEM(the Examination for postgraduate candidates)，provide a good illustration. Some of us feel depressed when thinking that they are not able to prepare well, so they even give up the chance of participating in the examination. In fact, the exam is not as difficult as they suppose, and a little more courage and confidence will motivate them to achieve the final successs。

　　尾段：建议+展望

　　Accordingly, it is the time that we placed great emphasis on building up our confidence. What we should bear in mind is that no one can overcome difficulties without confidence。(In other words,  We should be honest about the challenges we face。) only in this wa we can se a right goal. challenge it ,and achieve it。

　　Tips:

　　1.稳重下体的部分是精彩的语言，即文章的高分点，希望同学们学习。

　　2.文中有下划线的部分是范文的错误，希望大家思考，然后改正，避免自己在写作时犯这样的错误。

　　3.再次强调，希望大家不要背范文，学习精彩的句式表达，背会，通过多练习掌握这些句型。

　　小作文范文及解析

　　2007年Part A  真题及解析(投诉信&建议信)：

　　Directions:

　　Write a letter to your university library ,making suggestions for improveing its service. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

　　Do not sign your own name at the den of the letter. Ues “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address。

　　To Whom It May Concern,

　　I am a student in this university who regularly comes to the library to spend ma spare time. Generally speaking ,the services you offer here are quite good; however ,I have some suggestions for you to adopt. And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration。

　　To begin with ,will you please prolong the time for reading? In the daytime, most of the students are having classes, so they can’t come to the library. Moreover ,some of the books on shelves are out of date. If you are so kind as to provide us some books such as the latest magazines ,we will be very pleased。

　　I really wish to have a more comfortable library. Thank you for your time and consideration。

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　2008 Part A 真题及解析(致歉信)：

　　Directions:

　　You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob ,your landlord there. Write him a letter to

　　make an apology, and

　　suggest a solution。

　　You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

　　Do not sign your own name at the den of the letter. Ues “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address。

　　解析

　　Dear Bob,

　　I am writing to express my apology to you。

　　Several days ago，I borrowed your music CD when I lived in your house. Unfortunately，after I came back from Canada，I found it in my luggage. Was in such an hurry that I forgot to return it to you .I will send it to you by post of expose as soon as possible. If necessary，I will compensate for any troubles it may cause。

　　Once again，I feel so sorry for any  inconvenrence  caused. Please accept my apologies。

　　Sincerely yours，

　　Li Ming

　　2006年Part A真题及解析(申请信&请求信)

　　Directions：

　　You want to contribute to project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned， asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan。

　　Write your letter in no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET2.

　　Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter， use“Li Ming”instead。

　　Do not write the address。(10points)

　　解析：

　　To Whom It May Concern，

　　I am writing this letter to you to ask if there is a child in need of financial sponsorship through the Hope Foundation。

　　I am willing to give financial aid to those children who have not had a chance to receive education in poverty-stricken area。 I would like to help two kinds of children：first，those who do not have a stable source which can cover their education fees，and second，those whose academic performance in school is excellent. I have decided to commit myself to save the necessary

　　financial aid required to accomplish my goal. I would also like to be kept informed as to the academic progress of each student every term。

　　I have not doubt(There is not doubt)that I meet the criteria required for a sponsor and look forward to hearing from you。

　　Thank you for your consideration。

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Ming

　　推荐信：

　　Dear,

　　写作意图：简单介绍，自己与被推荐人关系，推荐他做什么。

　　推荐原因：被推荐人的相关工作经历或个性特点，应当突出与写信人的相关性。

　　感谢与期待。

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Ming

　　解析：

　　Dear Sir，

　　It is with a great pleasure that I recommend to you Mr. Li Lei, an outstanding accountant, for working in your firm。

　　Mr. Li graduated from China Financial University in 1991, majoring in accountancy, After graduation,he came to our firm to be an accountant. In 1996 he obtained the certificate of a certified accountant ,and in 2001 he was promoted to the one of the chief accountants of our firm because of his excellent work。

　　In association with me,mr. li impressed me that he was a friendly and pleasant gentleman,devoted to his firm and profession .it is surely a huge loss for our firm that he has to leave us for some personal reasons。

　　I recommend mr. li without reservation and believe you will find him a real treasure very soon。。

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li ming

　　2005年part a 真题及解析(辞职信)：

　　Directions:

　　Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine design and fashion .but now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, mr. wang,

　　Telling him your decision ,stating your reason(s)，and making an apology。

　　Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Wrte it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “li ming”instead. You do not need to write the adress。

　　解析：

　　Dear mr.wang,

　　I am writing this letter to apologize that I will quit the position as an editior for you are your magazine for the reason of myself。

　　Two months ago, I was accepted by the design and fashions,as a member of it . I was deeply impressed by the kindness,diligence of all staff members around me. But during the span of working here, I have come to realize that the job probably is not suitable for me because I want a more pesceful life ,such as a teacher. And you know that I am not an outgoing girl. I find that I am not able to devote all my efforts to a job which I do not reslly like。

　　So I am awfully sorry to tell you my decision to quit.please accept my apology。

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li ming

　　2009年考研英语大纲样题应用文部分(询问信)

　　Directions：

　　You are preparing for an English test and are in need of some reference books.Write a letter to

　　the sales department of bookstore to ask for：

　　detailed information about the books you want，

　　methods of payment，

　　time and way of delivery。

　　You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end

　　Of the letter.Use“Li Ming”instead.You do not need to write the address。

　　解析：

　　Dear Sir/Madam，

　　As a student preparing for TOEFL in the coming May，I am writing to ask if you have

　　Appoches to TOEFL complied by professor Wamg Sming and published by University College

　　Press in 2006(注意次序)

　　If you have the book for sale，I’d like to mail order it.Pleasel let me know if I can pay for it.by money order or do you accept the credit card?

　　I’d appreciate it if you could send me the book at your earliest convenience by EMS to the following address:

　　Li Ming

　　Room 158, student dormitory no.8

　　West campus, Beijing university

　　Beijing ,100081

　　Sincerely yours

　　Li Ming 

　　第五篇 补充部分

　　应用文— 摘要参考

　　To begin with, the purpose of the writer is to show us that (中心词一)is of grate significance, yet the though-provoking implications conveyed should be taken more carefully. Some driving factors that contribute to the above-mentioned issue may be summarized as follows. Above all, we may look into every possible reason except the leading cause, which is(分论点一)。In addition, as far as the author is concerned,(分论点二)is of utmost importance to both our society and ourselves. To sum up, by analyzing these factors illustrated in the essay, we may draw the conclusion that importance should be attached to (中心词二)   

　　看图说话作文

　　第一段

　　第二段

　　(一)社会问题、社会现象=养老、追星、过度捕捞、母鸡

　　What the author illustrates in the cartoon reflects a hot topic which caused our concern: the problem of   draws more and more attention from many quarters。

　　Naturally, it is not a coincidence. Several factors could account for it and the following are the most critical ones:

　　①    经济原因Any behavior has profound economic motivation and the same goes with n./n短语    

　　②    公共意识The public fail to see the consequence of the problem conveyed by the picture above and let it go without taking any action。