跨考教育[微博]英语教研组董瑞敏老师认为，大家也要谨慎一些如果只是机械性的将四、六级脑海中残存的一些内容搬过来，也只能得到一半左右的分数。要注意审题，题目中图片的大概意思是：大学生从大一到大三从事兼职的人数呈现缓慢增长的趋势，而大四阶段却急速增长。第二段应该透过现象解释原因，至少分两方面：第一，为何大一到大三从事兼职的人数缓慢增长；第二，为何大四从事兼职学生的数量激增。最后一段分析这种现象是否符合客观规律。

 

　　范文：In the bar chart, it shows the changes of the proportion of thestudents having part-time jobs during the four years’ study in college. Theproportion increases slightly from the first year to the third year, however,the fourth year has witnessed a fast increase, surging to 88.24%。

 

　　There is no denying that this trend is verypervasive in current colleges and in a certain degree is quite proper. To beginwith, when students in their first year in college, their major job is tostudy, not to work. They have to lay a profound knowledge base so that theymake a good preparation for future work. What’s more, when students are goingto step out of school and enter into the society, they have to know lots ofexperience , for example, how to deal with challenges outside, so they need tohave some part-time jobs. Clearly, doing a part time job has many advantages. Studentscan learn how to get along well with others and know the society moreprofoundly. Secondly, to take a part-time job provides the students with avaluable opportunity to put what he has learned from books into practice.Finally, students can make some money, which helps to unload theirfamilies’financial burden。

 

　　Due to the analysis above, to be an eligible heir of socialismconstruction, you have to strike a balance between your study and the job.Study is your major task while a part time job is a minor one though workexperience is desirable。