写作补充
重大原则!
1. 用最没可能出错的语法时态(一般现在时)——描述图片 & 写出观点句——加进模板
2. 看清图片!不要跑题
3. 心灵健康!不要反党反人类
3. 别展现自己的深邃思想,考研作文给分不看这个!
4. 而且,玩深邃常常死得很惨,很惨……
5. 从头到尾写三段——总分总(具体见下)
开始动手写!
1. 每段都顶头写(不留那两格),两段间空一行
2. 考研大作文归类成三种:
①社会现象类(画的是社会问题糟糕物)
(写作思路:看图说话——‘为什么这种现象会产生’——‘怎么解决它’)
②精神品质类(画的是雷锋尸变,哦不,是雷锋重生之类的好家伙)
(写作思路:看图说话——‘它为什么重要’——‘大家都来提倡它’)
③正反对比类(今年基本不会考)
(写作思路:看图说话——列举优点 缺点——‘你支持哪边’)
三个放一块能看出——不管写哪种 都要看图说话!
第一段总起:
看图说话 模板(加粗的部分全都不用自己写)
第零句话(引入话题)(适用于社会现象/正反对比):
It is a striking fact that ... has aroused public attention. (搞不懂它干嘛用的童鞋不必写)
第一句话(图片的简单描述)可选:
We see in the picture …(烂)
This is a very interesting picture of …(一样烂)
As is vividly depicted in the set of drawings, flowers in the greenhouse cannot withstand wind and rain.
The set of drawings present us with a scene that flowers in the greenhouse cannot withstand wind and rain.
In the set of pictures we could see clearly that flowers in the greenhouse cannot withstand wind and rain.
It is obvious that the number of fishes shrank drastically due to excessive commercial fishing, as is vividly portrayed in the pictures below.
第二句话(图片的进一步描述)可选:
More specifically / More precisely / To put it more exact, there was only one boat but numerous / a vast number of / piles and piles of / a host of / a multitude of fish in 1900. On the contrary / In contrast / However, there were piles and piles of fishing boats but only one fish in 1995.
第一二句话的又一个实例:
①简单描述
In this drawing we could see clearly that there is a small lamp against the background of full darkness.
②进一步描述
More specifically, there is a flame on the lamp, while it looks like a smiling face which is giving out light.
③Just as the caption indicates, “爱心是一盏灯,在越黑暗的地方越明亮。”
上方的③——图片里有小标题,就这样写
但假如小标题属唐僧类型(一大堆字儿)
就别写了
会被考官砍死的
第二段展开:这时,要分出三条攻略路线(根据三种不同类型)
不管哪种都得搞得层次鲜明(加个承接短语):
开头:To start with In addition Equally important
这个原因,另一个原因:For one thing, … For another, … On the macro level, … on the micro level …
攻略路线一 社会现象类文章第二段:
第一句:说明这个图表达的一个什么样的社会现象/问题 (八选一)
1) In fact, this kind of 文化全球化/偶像崇拜/不尊重老人 is not uncommon nowadays in our society.
2) In fact, what this picture illustrates is a phenomenon that has long existed in today’s China. That is, 文化全球化/偶像崇拜/不尊重老人etc.
3) In fact, this seemingly simple cartoon subtly discloses a prevailing phenomenon that has long existed in nowadays society. That is, 文化全球化/偶像崇拜/不尊重老人etc.
4) The artist of the cartoon apparently intends to draw our attention to the prevailing social phenomenon that偶像崇拜;不赡养老人etc.
5) In effect, this cartoon is a miniature of a prevalent phenomenon that ... 偶像崇拜;不赡养老人etc.
6) Conspicuously, this cartoon symbolically characterizes a status quo that偶像崇拜;不赡养老人etc.
7) With the advent of 21st century, people’s living standard has been much improved. Yet, a discordant situation has emerged nowadays: 偶像崇拜;不赡养老人etc.
8) What does the cartoonist want to tell us? Actually, this drawing shows us a social phenomenon that偶像崇拜;不赡养老人etc.
第二句:对于社会现象进一步展开描述 (三选一)
1) Unfortunately, in contemporary China, especially in some metropolis, this sort of phenomenon is becoming increasingly common and eye-catching.
2) Confronted with ...,numerous citizens, particularly youngsters, incline to ... rather than ...
3) A case in point is ... (举例展开,这种方法适合牛人)
第三句:现象产生的原因;或者现象的好处;或者现象的坏处。
原因如下:(三选一)
1) Why, you may wonder, is偶像崇拜;不赡养老人 so severe in today’s China?
2) Why, you may wonder, does this phenomenon arise?
3) Two fundamental factors, in my mind, could account for 偶像崇拜;不赡养老人.
好处如下: (二选一)
1) Obviously, 偶像崇拜;不赡养老人might give rise to/bring about/exert
a host of/a multitude of/numerous/countless(单词四选一)
favorable / positive / desirable / beneficial (单词四选一)
influence/effects/consequences.(单词三选一)
2) Undoubtedly, no one could fail to notice the
favorable / positive / desirable / beneficial (同上)
influence/effects/consequences
that 偶像崇拜;不赡养老人bring to us.
坏处如下:(二选一)
1) Obviously, 偶像崇拜;不赡养老人might give rise to/bring about/exert
a host of/a multitude of/numerous
unfavorable/negative/undesirable/harmful
influence/effects/consequences.
2) Undoubtedly, no one could fail to notice the
unfavorable/negative/undesirable/harmful
influence/effects/consequences
that 偶像崇拜;不赡养老人 bring to people.
第四句与第五句:
第一个原因与第二个原因 或 第一个好处与第二个好处 或 第一个坏处与第二个坏处
1) One reason is that ... Perhaps the primary reason is that ...
2) On the one hand, ... On the other hand, ...
3) For one thing, ... For another, …
社会现象类文章第三段
第一句 说明宏观的解决方案 (二选一)
1. I gradually realize that the authority and mass media need to advocate …
2. I personally believe that the authority and mass media need to advocate …
第二句 说明微观的具体措施 (二选一)
Equally important = Likewise = Similarly
In the meantime = Meanwhile = Simultaneously
1. Equally important, every one of us might as well …
2. In the meantime, it is every individual’s duty to …
第三句 用一个万能的名人名言来结尾
Just as Benjamin Franklin put it, “Never leave that until tomorrow, which you can do today.” Yes, we can!
攻略路线二 精神品质类文章的第二段:
第一句:说明这个图表达的一个什么精神或者品质 (六选一)
1. Apparently, the purpose of this drawing is to emphasize the importance of cooperation in our daily life.
2. In effect, the message is simple: the cooperative spirit is of great significance to people, particularly the youth.
3. By drawing this picture, the cartoonist has successfully drawn our attention to the importance of ...
4. It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about the importance of …
5. This drawing, although a little exaggerating and satirical at the first glance, conveys a solid truth: …
6. What can we deduce from this picture? Actually, there is a deeper notion behind it: …
第二句:说明这种精神品质在人们中广泛缺少 (三选一)
1. Unfortunately, in contemporary China, especially in some metropolis, this spirit is universally lacked or even missed among individuals today.
2. However, confronted with ...,numerous citizens, particularly youngsters, incline to ... rather than ...
3. A case in point is ... (牛人才举例)
第三句:这种精神品质重要的原因;或者这种精神品质的好处;
原因如下:(二选一)
1. Why, you may wonder, is合作;自信 so essential to today’s people, especially the young men?
2. Two fundamental factors, in my mind, could account for the importance of 合作;自信
好处如下: (二选一)
1. Obviously, 合作;自信might give rise to/bring about/exert
a host of/a multitude of/numerous/countless
favorable / positive / desirable / beneficial
influence/effects/consequences.
2.Undoubtedly, no one could fail to notice the
favorable / positive / desirable / beneficial
influence/effects/consequences that 合作;自信bring to citizens.
第四句:第一个原因 或 好处
1. One reason is that ...
2. On the one hand, ...
3. For one thing, ...
第五句:第二个原因 或 好处
1. Perhaps the primary reason is that ...
2. On the other hand, ...
3. For another, ...
精神品质类文章第三段
第一句 说明宏观的解决方案 (二选一)
1. I gradually realize that the authority and mass media need to advocate … encourage enlighten
2. I personally believe that the authority and mass media need to advocate …
第二句 说明微观的具体措施 (二选一)
Equally important = Likewise = Similarly
In the meantime = Meanwhile = Simultaneously
1. Equally important, every one of us might as well …cultivate strengthen
2. In the meantime, it is every individual’s duty to … cultivate
第三句 用一个万能的名人名言来结尾
Just as Aristotle put it, “Watch your character; it becomes your destiny.”
攻略路线三 正反对比类
今年考到可能不大
仅以Internet为例:
In the picture we could see 许多人在网络中学习工作和娱乐 即 As the picture reveals clearly, many people are using the internet, studying, playing games and doing business with each other. 或 an enormous number of citizens are surfing on the Internet, working, playing games and chatting with one another.
More specifically, 网络似乎把人们互相连接起来,while因特网又好像把人们彼此分开。 即 More specifically, Internet connects these people while it seems that the web separates them from each other. 或 it seems that the web connects the citizens together, while Internet seemingly separates them from one other.
In fact, this subtle comic asks us a controversial question: is the Internet a blessing or a disaster? In terms of the Web, there is no consensus of opinions among people. On the one hand, some people assert that(Internet确实给人们带来了很多好处) Internet indeed brings about a lot of benefits to the individuals. To specify my statement, I would like to take me as an illustration. 作为一个大学生,我不但可以通过网络阅读新闻,和朋友聊天,而且可以在网上方便的买到便宜的商品。
As an university student, I not only can read the news through Internet and chat with friends, but also can buy inexpensive things conveniently online.
On the other hand, opponents claim that the web might also exert numerous undesirable consequences. 素材
在当今中国,尤其在一些大城市中,越来越多的市民在网络上花费了大量的时间和金钱。(这个句型我讲过的!)In contemporary China, especially in some metropolitans, an increasing number of citizens spend a great deal of time and money on the Internet. 更有甚者,一些学生,多数是大学生,迷恋于网络而荒废了学业。(伴随状语的句型)Even worse, some students, mostly university students, get addicted to the web, giving up their study.
设问句开头Does Internet link people or disconnect them? From my perspective, Internet has brought about both positive and negative influence on today’s society. Therefore, we might as well avoid those undesirable effects, when making full use of Internet.
考研精品班写作之名人名言——陈少清出品
一、通用句式
Just as sb. put it…/Just as a famous saying goes…
二、名人名言及适用情况
正反对比:
1 Because even Achilles has the weakness--his heel.( Just as a famous saying goes…)
2 To be or not to be, that’s a question.(Shakespeare, 1564-1616)
通用: 3 Just as Benjamin Franklin put it, “Never leave that until tomorrow, which you can do today.”
4 Three passions have governed my life: the longing for love, the search for knowledge, and the unbearable pity for the suffering of mankind. (Russel)
坚持:5 Hew a stone of hope out of the mountain of despair. (John F. Kennedy)
“By persisting in your path, though you forfeit the little, you gain the great.”
Ralph Waldo Emerson 1803-1882
American Poet, Lecturer and Essayist
奉献:6 Ask not what your country can do for you, ask what you can do for your country. (John F. Kennedy)
奋斗励志、宽容:7 Tsinghua University’s school motto goes, “A gentleman should ceaselessly strive along; a man must also hold a broad mind.”
求知、真理:8 Let Plato be your friend, and Aristotle, but more let your friend be truth. (Harvard University’s school motto)
合作:9
Just as John Adams, the second U.S. president quoted from the ancient Greek Aesop’s Fables, “United we stand, divided we fall.”
勇于革新:10
Only a person who risks is free.
The pessimist complains about the wind;
The optimist expects it to change;
And the realist adjusts the sails."
Take a risk
(William Arthur Ward)
个人提升:11
We are what we repeatedly do. Excellence, then, is not an act, but a habit.---Aristotle
Watch your character, it becomes your destiny." -- Frank Outlaw