GMAT考试写作指导:Argument范文十二

网络资源 Freekaoyan.com/2008-04-10

72.        Based upon sales reports over a three-month period that indicate an increase in
profits for stores that sell products for the home and a decrease in profits for clothing
stores, the business manager of a department store concludes that consumers are
choosing to purchase home furnishings rather than clothing. On the basis of this
conclusion, the manager recommends a reduction in the size of the clothing department
and an increase in the size of the home-furnishings department. This recommendation is
problematic in two critical respects.
      In the first place the author's conclusion that consumers are choosing to buy
products for their homes instead of clothing is based upon too small a sample. Data
gathered from a three-month period is insufficient to establish the conclusion drawn
from it. It is quite possible that the three-month period chosen is idiosyncratic and not
representative of entire year's sales. If so, reducing the size of the clothing departments
and enlarging the home-furnishings departments may be a costly mistake.
      In the second place, the data collected during the three month period may be
biased. The fact that the data reflects sales in local stores is cause for concern. It is
possible that the sales trend in a particular location is not representative of sales in other
regions. For example, sales of clothing in Florida during the winter months are likely to
be quite different from sales of clothing in Alaska during the same period.
      In conclusion, this argument is not persuasive as it stands. A more convincing
argument must provide additional sales data, collected at different periods of the year
and at different locations, that substantiates the trend in question.
鐟曚焦澹橀懓鍐埡閼板啫宕ユ稉鎾茬瑹鐠囧墽婀℃0妯糕偓渚€顣芥惔鎾扁偓浣筋潒妫版埊绱垫潻娆撳櫡鐠у嫭绨搾鍛弿閿涗礁婀痪鍨帳鐠愬綊妲勭拠浼欑磼
2娑撳洨顫掗懓鍐埡閼板啫宕ラ悽闈涚摍娑旓讣绱欐0妯虹氨閵嗕浇顫嬫0鎴欌偓浣稿弿婵傛绁弬娆欑礆閸欏﹤宸婚獮瀵告埂妫版﹫绱濆☉鐢垫磰547閹碘偓闂勩垺鐗�4娑撳洣缍戞稉顏団偓鍐埡閼板啫宕ユ稉鎾茬瑹缁夋垹娲伴妴浣解偓鍐埡閸忣剙鍙$拠鎾呯礄閺€鎸庝笉閼昏精顕㈤弫鏉款劅閿涘鈧拷40缁夊秳绗撴稉姘鳖敋婢诡偓绱欓柌鎴g€虹涵鏇烇紜閵嗕府BA閵嗕礁娴楅梽鍛櫌閸旓紕顢氭竟顐犫偓浣规煀闂傝绱堕幘顓狀敋婢诡偁鈧胶銇炴导姘紣娴f粎顢氭竟顐ょ搼閿涘鈧拷28缁鎮撶粵澶婎劅閸旀稓鏁电涵鏇氱瑩娑撴哎鈧拷1130缁夊秶绮¢崗鍛婃殌閺夋劑鈧倹妫ょ拋鐑樺亶閺勵垳婀℃0妯荤川缂佸啨鈧線顣芥惔鎾冲煕妫版﹫绱濇潻妯绘Ц婢跺秳绡勯弫娆愭綏閿涘奔绔存稉鐚嘔P娴兼艾鎲抽崸鍥у讲濠娐ゅ喕閹劎娈戦棁鈧Ч鍌樷偓锟�

相关话题/

  • 领限时大额优惠券,享本站正版考研考试资料!
    大额优惠券
    优惠券领取后72小时内有效,10万种最新考研考试考证类电子打印资料任你选。涵盖全国500余所院校考研专业课、200多种职业资格考试、1100多种经典教材,产品类型包含电子书、题库、全套资料以及视频,无论您是考研复习、考证刷题,还是考前冲刺等,不同类型的产品可满足您学习上的不同需求。 ...
    本站小编 Free壹佰分学习网 2022-09-19