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Dear all,
This topic is hoped to serve as a bulletin board, where each one of us can post your usual composition excercises, while others can review and communicate freely.
Poor or good at writing, let's share our own words and opinions openly, bravely and actively. Any works is encouraged, and any advice is appreciated. Let us learn by practising and helping each other.
——Then, who will be the first, come on and we are looking forward!
[ 本帖最后由 agrace 于 2008-10-6 13:27 编辑 ]
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Sofa~~~
Don't stint your sweat.
Hold on!
And you'll find the treasure you've be seeking for in the end.
[ 本帖最后由 mini0112 于 2008-10-6 14:59 编辑 ]
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GREAT!
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openly, bravely and actively.
YEAH~
It is very helpful for my writing~
so
thanks first~
of course
I will come here constently~
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Oct. 6, 2008
Today is the first day when I decide to SHAISHAI my "improving" English.
You said " Don't say my English is poor, but is improving!". What an encouraging word and surely I like it. However, it is only a beginning for me who’s still having a clear mind, and I believe it’s the right way to do more exercises for improving my English gradually. So I come here, bravely and a little shyly, with you guys, posting my words, reading yours carefully, and waiting for every earnest comment. Please help me with no hesitation, and so do I.
Finally, good night and see everybody tomorrow. Tomorrow is another day~
[ 本帖最后由 agrace 于 2008-10-7 20:42 编辑 ]
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引用:原帖由 agrace 于 2008-10-7 09:53 发表
Oct. 7, 2008
Today is the first day when I decide to SHAISHAI my "improving" English.
What does " SHAISHAI " mean?
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引用:原帖由 笔为剑 于 2008-10-7 15:51 发表
What does " SHAISHAI " mean?
"SHAISHAI" means “to show”
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Oct.7, 2008
The growth of Psychology in the twenty first century, with its consequent requirement of a longer, more systemic training, implied greater problems for amateur participation in professional circles.
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引用:原帖由 agrace 于 2008-10-7 20:44 发表
Oct.7, 2008
The growth of Psychology in the twenty first century, with its consequent requirement of a longer, more systemic training, implied greater problems for amateur participation in pro ...
Oct.8,2008
A great deal of attention is being paid today to the air-pollution，which give cause for tail gas, household garbage, and industrial rubbish etc. And this situation does exist today. The growth of air-pollution in the twenty first century, with getting steadily worse, implied greater problems for human beings and animals which have lived in the earth. What was less visible then, however, were the new, negative forces for air-pollution. There are reasons to be not optimistic.
如今，人们正在高度重视由汽车尾气、生活垃圾、工业垃圾等引起的空气污染的问题。目前，这种情况确实存在。21世纪空气污染的日益严重，意味着我们居住的地球环境越来越恶化了。空气污染的情况以前并不如现在这样明显，现在我们完全有理由不那么乐观了。
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引用:原帖由 奋斗并快乐着 于 2008-10-7 22:01 发表
Nothing will overtake you if your determination to get your dream is strong enough!
everybody in this world got a dream, what’s your dream?
Some dreams come true, some don’t.
But just rememb ...
Yeah~
Nothing can stop us in pursuit of our dreams！
