2009年的考题在图画设计上下了很大功夫。试卷上呈现出一个大型的蜘蛛网,在网格中很多人在上网。很显然网络星罗棋布,把距离遥远的人们连结在一起,但蜘蛛网又把所有人分割在小隔断中,让他们近在咫尺却依然无法面对面的沟通。图画中人们都在愉快地上网,网络普及到了生活的每一个角落。如果从事物的正反角度来看,带来便利的同时又造成了沟通的不顺畅,这正是图画作者所表达的中心思想。当然最后是要让考生对这个现象给予点评了。主流的思想一定是告诫网民们在上网的过程中不要过度沉溺,形成网瘾,不要耽误时间或丧失沟通的技能。上网只是生活当中的一部分而已
在创作文章时,可以遵循提纲来进行三段式展开。第一段描述图画,对图画中的蜘蛛网和上网的人群进行客观描述。由于图画的风格非常奇怪,有冲突的信息在里面,可以稍加点评,指出其中人们通过网络去沟通却又被蜘蛛网隔开的现象。第二段是关键展开段,先要从蜘蛛网的象征意义入手,通过抽象图画面的象征意义引入主题:网络功能的二元性,或利弊。接着考生可以充分论述网络给人类生活带来的好处,包括获得新闻信息、聊天沟通、在线学习、发送资料、网络购物等等。同时,又要把网络已经带来的问题展示出来,和本图画相关的,就是影响了人们面对面的沟通。网民隐藏在网络的一端,戴上虚幻的面具,和另一个带上面具的人聊天。这样的沟通是以幻想和推测进行的,虽然激发了每个人的好奇心,但却浪费了时间,远离了现实生活,让不少人变得自闭,失去了沟通的技能。在第二段分析的基础上,最后一段得出主流结论,即劝导人们要适度上网,不要过度,利用好时间生活和工作,不要把时间全部浪费在上网中,不要沾染网瘾。网络是用来丰富我们的生活的,绝不是为了给你我设置沟通的障碍。
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The past decade has witnessed an increasingly inseparable relationship between man and Internet. As is vividly depicted in the picture, within a stretching spider web many people are surfing on line, either to entertain themselves or to meet the work’s needs. Actually on-line visiting has become a routine activity in our everyday life. However, it seems rather ironic to present people separated from each other by the spider web when they attempt to communicate。
The metaphoric and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed the duality of the relationship between man and Internet. The spider web undoubtedly serves as a symbol of Internet, both connecting people and isolating them from each other. On the one hand, there is no denying that Internet is currently one of the most efficient media used for interpersonal communication. As a college student, I get on line everyday to discuss news with other people on BBS, to study English by registering for web courses, to chat freely through e-mails with my friends. Being a veteran on-line shopper, I frequently bargain with sellers to purchase books at much lower prices. But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain face-to-face contact with their friends and colleagues. Cyber-living resembles the experience of seeing disguised people behind a mask, maintaining distance between one another. Once indulged in the fictitious world, people feel reluctant to approach others and to concentrate on real life. That’s why some people have lost the skill of direct contact and get alienated from others。