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　　The picture sends a striking scene to us : there are two men climbing a mountain, but one of them is eager to abandon because of their tiredness, meanwhile the other one inspires him to insist going on.

　　Needless to say, the cartoonist focuses on reminding us that persistence truly matters. At the top of the list, we should attach importance to the spirit of perseverance mainly because that it can force us to better ourselves so we would be qualified enough for our future career, and be ready on the encounter of the oncoming struggles. Further more, we are supposed to place a high value on the role played by perseverance in our individual growth. But on the other hand , in this growing world, perseverance is to personal growth as what water is to fish. To conclude, if persistence gets out of our concentration in whatever possible mean, we would suffer much loss beyond imagination.

　　So , it is so significant for us to draw some meaningful inspiration from the above picture. For one thing, we are supposed to transform it for the purpose of encouraging the youngsters. For another, we are supposed to foster the consciousness of teenagers that it truly matters to go ahead in order to achieved our goals. Only by doing this, can we be a winner in the face of struggles.

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　　这张图片给我们展示出一幅令人深省的画面：爬山的两个人中，但是其中一个人由于疲劳想放弃攀登，而另外一人给予了鼓励，希望他坚持爬下去。

　　不必多言，图画的作者一定是在警示我们坚持的意义。第一，我们应重视坚持的精神，坚持可以使得我们提升自己，只有这样，我们在今后才会有能力取得事业上的成功，才能做好准备去攻克之后的艰难险阻。另外，我们也要注重坚持精神在个人成长方面的促进作用。在这个不断变化的时代，坚持于个人成长的意义就如同水对于鱼的意义一样重要。 也就是说，如果我们以任何可能的方式拒绝坚持，我们必将受到很大的亏损。因此，从上图中获取积极的思考尤为重要。一方面，我们应该用它来启发青年一代。另一方面，我们要培育青年一代不抛弃、不放弃的坚持精神。只有这样，我们才能迎难而上、取得成功。

　　【大作文参考范文】

　　Vividly illustrated in the above picture are two young college students climbing a famous mountain. One student, sitting on the steps too tired to continue climbing, said, “I’m too tired and don’t want to climb any more.” Another one, however, gave him a bottle of water and encouraged him to have a rest and then go on climbing. The caption under the picture reads, “On the way to the top of a mountain”.

　　The cartoon reflects a common phenomenon that perseverance is an indispensable part of our lives, which has aroused wide public concerns and provoked heated discussions recently. No one would deny that, perseverance is truly the fundamental attribute of top performers, which separates the high achievers from the rest of the pack. After years of research, Prof. Liu, a leading authority in sociology, once stated, “It was by sticking to what they were aiming to that some famous leaders in the history created incredible miracles, like win a great war or establish a great empire from scratch.” Besides, a great example of benefits of perseverance would be the success story of Jack Ma. He had no educational background in technology and didn’t have a degree from any top-tier University, but he became a dot-com billionaire with his persistent innovation in online market place.

　　As far as a qualified college student is concerned, I firmly believe that we can profit a lot from the spirit of perseverance. For my part, I would never lose any chance to insist when encountering the problems and setbacks. Besides, I would strongly appeal to my fellow classmates to develop such a valuable spirit as perseverance to face the challenges and hardships.

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　　The cartoon provides us with a thought-provoking scene:tw omen are climbing a hill,but one ofthem desires to give updue to tiredness,while the other one encourages him to keep going.

　　Undoubtedly,the cartoon is aimed at reminding us of the significance of persistence.At the top of the list,we should attach importance to perseverance mainly due to that it can enable us to ameliorate ourselves so we can be qualified for future career promotion,and be ready for meeting the for the coming challenges.What’smore,we ought to place a high value on the role played by persistence in personal growth.Putitan other way,in this ever-changing world,perseverance is to personal growth what water is to fish.To sumup,if persistence misses our attentionin any possible way,we will suffer a great loss beyond imagination.

　　Hence,it is vital for us to derive positive implications from the above cartoon.For one thing,we should frequently use it to enlighten the young.For another,we should cultivate the awareness of teenagers that it is very vital to keep going to wardour goals.Only by doing so,can we become winner in the face of difficulties.

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　　这个漫画给我们呈现了一个发人深思的情景：两人正在爬山，但是其中一个人因为疲劳想要放弃，而另一个人鼓励他继续下去。

　　毫无疑问，图画的作者旨在提醒我们坚持重要性。首先，我们应该重视坚持，主要是因为坚持可以让我们完善自身，这样我们未来才有资格得到职业生涯的进步，才能做好准备迎接以后的挑战。另外，我们也应该重视坚持在个人成长方面的作用。在这个多变的时代，坚持对于个人成长就像水对于鱼一样重要。换言之，如果我们以任何可能的形式忽视坚持，我们将遭受非常巨大的损失。因此，从以上图画中得出积极的含义非常重要。一方面，我们应该经常用它来启迪年轻人。另外一方面，我们应该培养青少年重视坚持的意识。只有这样，我们才能成为困难面前的赢家。