As a consequence, the one who owns the best technologies and services can master the share of the market, which is an invariable policy concerning any business areas. All in all, the trend suggests that as long as we are improving our strategy and service, the home-made automobiles will continue to take a lion’s share of the automobile market. Only when we can establish a solid foundation internally, can we look forward to a successful international competition in the near future.

Sample 3

What is apparently shown in the above chart is the changes of market share of car brands in 2008 and 2009. On the basis of above data, the market percentage of domestic cars varied significantly, jumping by some 8% only during two years. Meanwhile, 2009 witnessed a dramatic slump of Japanese cars, decreasing from 35% in 2008 to 25% in 2009. Instead, the share of American autos has nearly kept constant.

In effect, there are a variety of accessible reasons, I argue, that give rise to the increasing market share of domestic cars, the following ones seeming to be most crucial. On the top of the list is that with the Chinese development of economy and society, the home-made automobile industries have boomed and flourished. More important is that the popularity of domestic cars is credited to the technology advance, which makes consumers having higher confidence in domestic cars.

As a result of the mentioned factors, domestic cars have a big advantage over those of Japan and America. It can draw the conclusion that if domestic cars want to make a successive difference, they need strive to improve product quality, safe, performance and service.

2010 年

Sample 1 what is shown in the chart is that mobile phone subscriptions grew rapidly from 2000 to 2008. We can also find out that developing countries are the driving force for such a rapid growth. According to the chart，mobile-phone subscription number increased to 8 times from 2000 to 2008， that is from around 0.5 billion to 4 billion，while subscription number only increased twice from around 0.5 billion to 1 billion.

I think there are two main reasons for such a great contrast. First of all，developing countries have much larger population than developed countries. For example，China and India nearly have half of the total population of the world. China has the most mobile-phone users right now，which increased greatly from 2000 to 2008. It is the same in India and other developing countries.

Meanwhile，developing countries have been employing strong economic growth in recent years. As a result，people in most developing countries are richer and richer, especially in China. So they can afford to buy such necessities，including mobile-phone，as the prices continued to drop greatly in the past years. Thus，we can conclude that as economy grows strongly in developing countries，people in these countries can buy more products.

［得分］ 14 分

［评语］ 本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务，内容完整。在图表内容方面，考生并不仅仅 局限于数字本身，而是注意挖掘这些数字背后的规律，是对图表具体数字的总结与升华。在 评论方面，内容也比较全面、中肯。本文总体结构完整，语言比较流畅，措辞准确，用词和 句型结构有变化，无重大语法错误。另外，本文也有效使用了各种衔接手段，内容连贯，前 后照应，层次分明，易于理解。字数符合要求。但本文个别地方表达不明确，如 while subscription number only increased twice from around 0.5 billion to 1 billion，其主语应当是 developed countries。

Sample 2

What is shown in the chart predicts dramatic changes in the number of mobile-phone subscriptions both in developing countries and developed countries. Among year 2000 to 2008， the number of mobile-phone used in developing countries was lower than the number in developed countries. Whereas，from 2003，the number of mobile-phone used in developing countries exceeded that in developed countries，and the trend sustained to 2008，when the number of using mobile-phone in developed countries was still stably at 1 billion.

As far as I am concerned，some driving factors that contribute to this phenomenon may be summarized as follows. To begin with，with the rapid development of economy of developing countries，more and more people aford (afford) to buy mobile-phone for self-use. In addition，the population of developing countries increased fastly (fast) during the year 2000 to 2008. The last but not least, along with the development of the high technology, the price of mobile-phone sharply decrease，which made more people willing to buy it.

From all these aspects above，it is easy to tell that the trend of increasing numbers in use of mobile-phone in developing countries will been going in the near future.

［得分］ 11 分

［评语］ 本文较好地完成了试题规定的任务，内容比较完整，既有对图表本身的描述，也 有考生本人的评论。文章结构完整，用词和句子结构也有一定的变化，也较好地使用了各种 衔接手段，语言基本通顺，层次清楚，易于理解。但是，本文还存在一定数量的语言错误。 如单词拼写错误 aford，表达方面的错误 Among year 2000 to 2002,... use of mobile-phone in developing countries will been going in the near future 等。