2020考研英语高分写作 第5集(4)

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2)2011英语(二):

At the top of the list, with the rapid development of our economy and society, more and more people prefer civil products to foreign ones. It’s reported that, approximately 55% of families in Chinese big cities are fond of cars made in China. In addition, we must admit that the government appeals to us to support our native industries. Last but not least, the fact cannot be ignored that, the cars made in China are increasingly qualified. (14分作文,满分15分)首先,随着我国经济和社会的迅速发展,相比外国产品,越来越多的人更喜欢国产品牌。据报道,大约55%的中国大城市家庭喜欢国产汽车。此外,我们必须承认,政府也呼吁我们支持本国企业。最后但同样重要的一点,不容忽视的是,国产汽车的质量越来越好。

3)2012英语(二):

On the one hand, the staff members in their forties usually have to undertake a lot of responsibilities from both their families and their careers. Sometimes they are even under pressure to pursue money, power, high social status, and so on, which are all symbols of success. So, they have the least satisfaction in their jobs. On the other hand, people over 50 generally have shifted their life goals from achieving the ultimate success to a relatively easy and comfortable life, and therefore are inclined to be much more satisfied with their jobs. 一方面,41至50岁之间的员工通常不得不承担来自于家庭和事业的双重责任。有时他们甚至承受着获取金钱、权力、较高的社会地位等压力,而这些都象征着成功。因此,他们对工作的满意度最低。另一方面,50岁以上的人通常已经将人生目标从最终的成功转变为一种相对轻松、舒适的生活,因而更容易对工作感到满意。

4)2013英语(二):

Firstly, according to the above chart, more than half of the undergraduates take part-time jobs. For some undergraduates, working part-time helps cover their tuition fees and other expenses. For others, part-time position helps them accumulate some working experience and develop a sense of independence. Secondly, a 16.31 percentage increase in the final year is mainly attributed to two factors: Companies prefer graduates with some hands-on experience, and undergraduates could better know what they want and which job suits them by holding temporary jobs. (高分作文)首先,根据上图可知,有超过一半的本科生会做兼职。对一些本科生来说,做兼职有助于补贴他们的学费和其他开销。对另一些本科生来说,做兼职可以帮助他们积累一些工作经验并培养一种独立意识。其次,到了临毕业的那一年,学生兼职的人数增长了16.31%,这主要归因于两方面的因素:公司想要有一定实际工作经验的毕业生;本科生通过做兼职可以更好地了解自己想要什么样的工作以及哪种工作适合自己。

5)2014英语(二):

First and foremost, there is a much nicer choice of options available in cities and towns, across the board. There are more jobs to choose from, and more different kinds of companies and types of work. In addition, big cities offer much more excitement and stimulation, partly as a result of all the various options available in many areas. Most importantly, people prefer to live in cities and towns for the convenience of the transportation systems. They usually have a well developed bus, subway, highway and airport transportation networks. 首先且最重要的是,几乎在所有的城镇,都有许多更好的选择。有更多可供选择的工作,以及更多不同的公司和工种。其次,大城市可以提供更多令人感到兴奋、刺激的事物,部分原因就是由于在这些地方有各种各样的选择。最为重要的是,由于交通系统的便捷性,人们更喜欢住在城镇。城镇通常有更为发达的公交、地铁、高速、机场等交通网络。

6)2015英语(二):

To start with, a New Year gift might be memorable because of the special occasion when it is given. If the present is something that only your best friend knew you had wanted, you will never forget it, since it shows the closeness of your relationship with that friend. In addition, festival presents might be unforgettable since they are related to significant events in your life. For instance, I still remember the first New Year gift my best friend, Leo, gave me. 首先,一份春节礼物之所以令人难忘,是因为送礼物的时机本身很特别。如果只有最好的朋友才知道你想要那份礼物,并把它送给了你,你一辈子都不会忘记,因为这份礼物代表着你们两人深厚的友谊。其次,春节礼物之所以令人难忘,是因为这些礼物与生命中的重大事件相关。比如,我还记得我最好的朋友列奥送给我的第一份新年礼物。

7)2016英语(二):

In the first place, travel can offer us a wide range of experiences. In travelling, we may join tourists marveling at the incredible power of Niagara Falls, mingle with the happy throngs strolling in the Paris boulevards and experience the bitterness and joy of people on different lands and in different times. In the second place, college students, who have to juggle academic work, romantic relationships and a busy social calendar, are particularly susceptible to pressure. By touring, they can successfully manage and reduce stress.一方面,旅游能够充实我们的人生经历。在旅行中,我们可以和游客一起,赞叹尼亚加拉瀑布那雷霆万钧之势,和喜洋洋的人群一起穿过巴黎的林荫大道,还可以体验不同时代、不同国土上人们的酸甜苦辣。另一方面,大学生不得不应对学习、恋爱和繁忙的社交日程,很容易感受到压力。通过旅游,他们可以成功地应对并缓解压力。

8)2017英语(二):

The first reason many people are interested in visiting a museum is to learn about the history and culture of a place. A country’s capital city, like Beijing, London or Paris is a veritable museum lover’s paradise, where one could literally spend days visiting dozens of museums. Another reason why people visit museums is that they are not only for adults, but for the whole family—a wonderful activity enjoyed by children as well as grandparents. It gives the whole family something they can spend several hours together doing, and for free or at a reasonable cost.第一个原因,许多游客对参观博物馆感兴趣是为了了解当地的历史和文化。一国的首都,如北京、伦敦或巴黎,简直就是博物馆爱好者的天堂,一个人可以花数天时间参观许多博物馆。另一个原因,参观博物馆不仅是成年人的消遣,还是全家人的极好的活动,老人和小孩都喜欢。不管是免费还是得花合理的费用,参观博物馆给一家人提供了好几个小时待在一起的机会。

9)2018英语(二):

In the first place, with the prosperity of economy in China and the increase of people’s income in recent decades, a large number of people are paying more attention to the features of a restaurant instead of prices. In the second place, in a bid to develop interpersonal relationship and enjoy comfortable life, consumers in mounting numbers prefer service and environment to other factors. 首先,随着中国经济的繁荣和近几十年来人们收入的增加,很多人越来越关注餐厅的特色,而不是价格。其次,为了拓展人际关系,享受舒适的生活,越来越多的消费者选择服务与环境而非其他。

10)2019英语(二):

First and foremost, with social competition becoming keener, the situation of the job market is increasingly grim. In addition, in today’s world, where college population grows rapidly, further education becomes essential if they wish to compete for a rewarding job. Last but not least, for those with a manageable schedule, exploratory mind and entrepreneurial spirit, starting their own business can offer important career benefits—not to mention a handsome paycheck. 首先且最重要的是,随着社会竞争变得日益激烈,就业市场的形势越来越严峻。其次,现在大学生的人数快速增长,如果他们想竞争得到一份满意的工作,升学就变得十分必要。最后但同样重要的一点,对于那些能合理安排时间,有探索思维和创业精神的同学而言,创业的经验会使他们在职场中受益匪浅,更别提他们拿到的那份丰厚薪水了。

● Summary:小结,1句,将论证的三句话进行总结,与本段主题句首尾呼应。可不写。

(三)Conclusion:结论段,归纳结论段,2句。

● Concluding sentence:结论句,1句。

1)2010英语(二):

Thus, we can conclude that as economy grows strongly in developing countries, people in these countries can buy more products. (14分作文,满分15分)因此,我们可以得出结论:随着发展中国家经济的强劲增长,这些国家的人们能购买更多的产品。

2)2011英语(二):

Taking into account what has been argued, we can come to the conclusion that this established trend is positive and therefore acceptable.(14分作文,满分15分)考虑到上述观点,我们能够得出结论:这一既定的趋势是积极的,因此可以接受。

3)2012英语(二):

In view of the above reasoning, I am convinced that it is difficult for everyone to be content with their jobs. 鉴于上述论证,我认为很难做到每个人都对工作满意。

4)2013英语(二):

In the end, the impact of part-time work on students’ academic performance depends on their ability to maintain a balance between their studies and the part-time job. 总之,兼职对大学生学业的影响取决于他们是否能够平衡花在学习和兼职上的精力。

5)2014英语(二):

Generally speaking, people in expanding numbers would prefer to live in cities and towns which offer a rich variety of many options, whether it is for jobs, leisure, cultural or intellectual activities. 总之,越来越多的人更愿意选择居住在城镇。城镇可以提供丰富的选择机会,无论是工作、娱乐、文化还是智力活动方面。

6)2015英语(二):

In summary, people spend a lot on Spring Festival presents for a large number of reasons.总之,人们在新年礼物上花销巨大是出于多种原因。

7)2017英语(二):

In summary, people enjoy visiting museums because doing so helps them to understand the history and culture of the place, be it at a local, regional, country or international level. 总之,人们喜欢参观博物馆——无论是当地、地区级、国家级还是世界级的博物馆——是因为这样能帮助他们了解当地的历史和文化。

8)2018英语(二):

With due consideration of all these contributors, we may predict that with the speedy development of our society, customers in expanding numbers will attach utmost significance to the feature, service as well as environment of a restaurant rather than prices or other factors. 考虑到所有这些因素,我们可以预计,随着社会的迅速发展,越来越多的消费者将更加重视餐厅的特色、服务、环境,而不是价格或其他因素。

9)2019英语(二):

Generally speaking, when it comes time for university graduates to decide their next step in life, there is no right or wrong choice for everyone. 总之,大学生毕业之际,每个人在决定人生中的下一步时,做何选择无所谓对与错。

● 包装结尾,展望未来:1句。

1)2010英语(二):

If people could imbue themselves with intelligence, prudence and discretion, I am sure that most of them would be able to sidestep the potential drawbacks of mobile phones while taking advantage of all the merits. 假如人们多动脑、谨慎些、具有判断力,我确信大多数人都能克服手机的弊端,并且利用其优势。

2)2011英语(二):

Obviously, if Chinese automobile industry wants to make continuous profits, what it needs is to try promotions that will reinforce Chinese brands’ image. 显而易见,如果中国的轿车产业想要继续赢利,需要尝试提升国产品牌形象的促销方式。

3)2012英语(二):

And it is advisable that people should adjust their expectations for work, and that companies should pay more attention to the welfare of their staff. 建议人们调整对工作的期望,而企业也应对员工的福利多加重视。

4)2013英语(二):

If students are able to manage their time effectively and secure a part-time position in a field related to their studies or interests, the job is certain to yield a positive impact. 假如他们能有效管理自己的时间,找到符合自己所学或兴趣的兼职岗位,那么兼职必定会对他们产生积极的影响。

5)2014英语(二):

At the same time, people like the energy and stimulation of a big city environment and the convenience of a well-developed transportation system. 同时,人们喜欢大城市的能量和刺激,以及高度发达的交通系统所带来的便利。

6)2015英语(二):

Most of all, it is easy to remember special presents as they give you a significant sense of personal worth. 最重要的原因是特别的礼物会带给你无比的自尊。

7)2016英语(二):

Taking all these factors into consideration, we may predict that with the quickening pace and ever-increasing pressure of campus life, the number of university students touring will keep growing in the forthcoming decade.考虑到所有这些因素,我们可以预计:随着校园生活节奏的加快和日益增大的压力,旅游的大学生数量在未来几年将持续增加。

8)2017英语(二):

Meanwhile, it is an educational and cultural experience that can be enjoyed by the whole family.同时,全家人去逛博物馆也是一件乐事,能从中学到知识,感受文化。

9)2019英语(二):

By taking career goals, financial status and personal preferences into consideration, students can improve their chances of making an optimal choice. 大学生在综合考虑职业目标、经济状况及个人偏好之后,就更有可能做出最佳选择了。





二、五星级历年真题详解





一 2010年英语(二)写作真题详解


Directions:

In this section, you are asked to write an essay based on the following table, in which you should

1) interpret the chart and

2) give your comments.

You should write at least 150 English words.

Write your essay neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.



命题解析

2010年考研英语(二)写作B节采用了图表作文这一题型,与2009年教育部公布的大纲样题(即2007年MBA写作真题)题型一致。图表作文这一题型在考研写作历史上曾经考查过四次,分别是1997年考研写作的柱状与饼状图、1999年考研写作的曲线图、2006年MBA写作的柱状图以及2007年MBA写作的表格图。2010年已是考研写作历史上第三次考查柱状图。图表作文这一题型应引起英语(二)考生的高度重视,希望考生对于曲线、表格、饼状及柱状四大图表全面复习,勿抱侥幸押题心理。

目前的考研英语(二)写作命题借鉴了近年MBA写作命题,2010年考查话题再次延续了2009年MBA写作话题:手机。2009年考查了关于手机短信的情景作文,2010年则考查关于手机入网的图表作文,二者同为流行文化这一主题,反映了考研命题组对于社会热点问题的关注。

至于提纲形式,则传承了MBA图表作文的两点提纲。2006年MBA提纲为:描述图表并分析可能的原因;2007年MBA图表作文提纲为:描述图表并说明原因;而2010年英语(二)提纲为:描述图表并给出你的评论。

针对两点提纲,有两种写法。第一种写法是第一点提纲写成第一段图表描述,第二点提纲分两段来写:原因列举+归纳结论或建议措施。第二种写法是第一点提纲分为两段:总体描述+细节描述;第二点提纲写为第三段:归纳结论或建议措施。上述两种写法均可,建议基础一般的同学采用第一种写法,基础较好的同学采用第二种写法。只要语言精彩、结构严谨、论证充分,均可取得高分。

本文首先应总体描述图表,并指出发达国家手机入网的数据保持平稳,而发展中国家则急剧增加,然后具体描述数据细节:开头、结尾数据及最高、最低数据。论证部分最好分析数据变化的深层原因:发达国家趋于饱和,而发展中国家前途无量。最后可预测发展趋势或归纳结论。

经典范文057

From the information given in the above column chart, we can see a striking contrast between developing and developed countries in mobile-phone subscriptions from 2000 to 2008. During this period, there has been a dramatic increase from 0.4 to 4 billion mobile phone subscriptions in developing countries, while that of developed countries remained steady at just under 1 billion.

At least two fundamental factors could have contributed to this phenomenon. On the one hand, with the rapid increase in economic development happening in developing countries, the telecommunication industry in those countries expanded greatly to meet the demand of globalization. As a result, the user base of mobile phones which can narrow the distance between people and link the whole world together, grew at an incredible speed. On the other hand, the extremely advanced civilization of developed countries means less potential in many aspects including in the area of private telecommunication tools and their demand for further enlargement of such tools tends to saturate.

In conclusion, while mobile-phone subscriptions, if used carelessly or without restraint, could prove to be a double-edged sword, the fact remains that such phones are already extremely prevalent in both developing and developed countries, and even today continue to rise in popularity. If people could imbue themselves with intelligence, prudence and discretion, I am sure that most of them would be able to sidestep the potential drawbacks of mobile phones while taking advantage of all the merits.



参考译文

根据以上柱状图提供的信息,我们可以看出,从2000年到2008年,发展中国家和发达国家在手机入网方面存在着惊人的对比。在此期间,发展中国家手机入网数从4亿急速增长到40亿,而发达国家的相关数据在10亿之下保持平稳。

至少有两点主要原因造成了这种现象。一方面,随着在发展中国家发生的快速经济增长,这些国家的电信产业必然会适应全球化的需求。因此,使用手机缩短人们之间的距离并与全世界联系的人数以惊人的速度增长。另一方面,发达国家极端先进的文明在私人电信工具等诸多领域意味着更少的发展潜力,他们对进一步开发此类工具的需求趋于饱和。

因此,如果不小心或没有节制,手机入网就是一把双刃剑。但事实上,手机入网在发展中国家和发达国家中均十分流行,这种趋势甚至今天还在继续扩大。假如人们多动脑、谨慎些、具有判断力,我确信大多数人都能克服手机的弊端,并且利用其优势。





二 2012年英语(二)写作真题详解

Directions:

Write an essay based on the following table. In your writing you should

1) describe the table, and

2) give your comments.

You should write at least 150 words.

某公司员工工作满意度调查



命题解析

2012年考研英语(二)再次考查了从2010年至2011年已经连续考查过两次的图表作文。同时,与往年一样,2012年并未考查“动车追尾”、“老人摔倒”、“食品安全”、“醉驾入刑”、“建设文化强国”等2011年国内热点话题,而是再次考查了一个中性话题:“工作满意度”。本题图表描述及原因分析稍有难度,很多考生发现无从下手。

值得注意的是,本文第一段应重点描述图表,首句总体描述:主题(工作满意度)+对象(某公司员工),第二至三句进行细节描述。次段应重点进行原因分析,首句使用过渡句,中间给出二至三点具体原因,重点分析为何40-50岁的人满意度最低、大于50岁的人满意度最高,可从工作压力、家庭负担、职业倦怠、工作态度、职业规划等各方面进行分析。尾句可进行总结,归纳结论或提出建议措施均可,如公司需提高福利待遇并提供更多关怀、员工要端正工作态度等。

经典范文058

The table clearly reflects the statistics of staff’s job satisfaction in a certain company. According to the data given above, we can conclude that the percentage of people satisfied with their jobs is highest among those over 50 years old, at about 40%. In contrast, the percentage of the staff not satisfied with their jobs is about 64% among those in their forties, the highest among all the three age groups.

The major determinant of satisfaction lies in people’s attitudes. On the one hand, staff members in their forties usually have to undertake a lot of responsibilities from both their families and their careers. Sometimes they are even under pressure to pursue money, power, high social status, and so on, which are all symbols of success. So, they have the least satisfaction in their jobs. On the other hand, people over 50 generally have shifted their life goals from achieving the ultimate success to a relatively easy and comfortable life, and therefore are inclined to be much more satisfied with their jobs.

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