2020考研英语高分写作 第5集(5)

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In view of the above reasoning, I am convinced that it is difficult for everyone to be content with their jobs. And it is advisable that people should adjust their expectations for work, and that companies should pay more attention to the welfare of their staff.



参考译文

这张表格清楚地反映了某公司员工工作满意度的统计数据。根据给出的数据,我们可以看出50岁以上的人工作满意度最高,约为40%。相反,41至50岁之间的人在三个群体中不满意度最高,约为64%。

主要的决定因素是人们的态度。一方面,41至50岁之间的员工通常不得不承担来自于家庭和事业的双重责任。有时他们甚至承受着获取金钱、权力、较高的社会地位等压力,而这些都象征着成功。因此,他们对工作的满意度最低。另一方面,50岁以上的人通常已经将人生目标从实现最终的成功转变为一种相对轻松、舒适的生活,因而更容易对工作感到满意。

鉴于上述论证,我认为很难做到每个人都对工作满意。建议人们调整对工作的期望,而企业也应对员工的福利多加重视。





三 2016年英语(二)写作真题详解

Directions:

Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should

1) interpret the chart, and

2) give your comments.

You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.



某高校学生旅游目的调查

命题解析

1. 真题渊源

2016年英语(二)大作文继2015年之后连续第二年考查饼状图,同时,避开当年传统文化、网上购物、环境保护等几大热门话题,继2005年MBA写作“十一黄金周”、2011年英语(一)“旅程之‘余’”之后,第三次考查“旅游”这一次热门话题。体现了考研写作命题明显的反押题倾向,也表明了真题在考研写作命题中至高无上的地位!

2. 写作方法

本文首段应该简要描述图表,首句进行总体描述:主题(旅游目的)+对象(某高校学生),接着进行细节描述,主要描述占比最大的两个目的(欣赏风景和缓解压力)。第二段进行因果论证,重点阐释两点原因:欣赏美景与缓解压力。尾段可进行预测趋势、归纳结论或提出建议措施。

3. 注意事项

本题提醒广大考生:切勿寄希望于考前所谓的“绝密押题”或“万能模板”,扎扎实实背诵默写、提高写作实力,才是取得高分的关键!

经典范文059

This pie chart clearly illustrates the purposes of touring for students in a certain university. As is reflected by the diagram, 37 percent of college students travel in order to appreciate the scenery. Next comes the aim of relieving pressure, accounting for 33 percent. By contrast, the percentages of students travelling aiming at other goals, making friends and cultivating independence account for 15%, 9% and 6% respectively.

Several primary factors could contribute to this phenomenon. In the first place, travel can offer us a wide range of experiences. In travelling, we may join tourists marveling at the incredible power of Niagara Falls, mingle with the happy throngs strolling in the Paris boulevards and experience the bitterness and joy of people on different lands and in different times. In the second place, college students, who have to juggle academic work, romantic relationships and a busy social calendar, are particularly susceptible to pressure. By touring, they can successfully manage and reduce stress.

Taking all these factors into consideration, we may predict that with the quickening pace and ever-increasing pressure of campus life, the number of university students touring will keep growing in the forthcoming decade.



参考译文

这幅饼状图清楚地揭示了某高校大学生的旅游目的。如图表所示,37%的大学生为了欣赏风景而旅游,接下来是为了缓解压力的目的,占了33%。相反,为了其他、广交朋友、培养独立能力旅游的大学生百分比分别各占15%、9%和6%。

一些主要原因可以解释这种现象。一方面,旅游能够充实我们的人生经历。在旅行中,我们可以和游客一起,赞叹尼亚加拉瀑布那雷霆万钧之势,和喜洋洋的人群一起穿过巴黎的林荫大道,还可以体验不同时代、不同国土上人们的酸甜苦辣。另一方面,大学生不得不应对学习、恋爱和繁忙的社交日程,很容易感受到压力。通过旅游,他们可以成功地应对并缓解压力。

考虑到所有这些因素,我们可以预计:随着校园生活节奏的加快和日益增大的压力,旅游的大学生数量在未来几年将持续增加。





四 2018年英语(二)写作真题详解

Directions:

Write an essay based on the following chart. In your essay, you should

1) interpret the chart, and

2) give your comments.

You should write about 150 words neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)



命题解析

继2010年英语(二)写作考查电信产业、2011年考查汽车产业、2014年考查城乡差别、2015年考查春节花销之后,2018年第五次考查关于经济类的中性话题,并非当年最热门话题。同时,继2015、2016年之后,2018年第三次考查饼状图。本题再次体现了目前英语(二)写作命题中严重的反押题倾向,也再次证明了真题的重要地位。

本书2018版第四章图表作文第五节十大万能框架前两篇均为经济管理类框架,几乎全文可以使用。第二节历年真题详解中,2012、2015、2016年真题均为静态图,第一段几乎完全可以使用。第三节十大必背范文中,第七篇、第十篇均为静态图,第一段几乎完全可用。同时,在笔者的《(2018)考研英语(二)高分写作考前预测20篇》一书中,第二章写作B节第二节十大万能框架前两篇均是经济管理类框架,几乎全文可以使用。

本题共两点提纲,第一点提纲应该改写为第一段图表描述段。首句进行总体描述,点出图表的主题(选择餐厅时的关注因素)+对象(某市消费者)+时间(2017年)。第二、三两句进行细节描述,第二句说明饼状图中数据较大的三个对象:特色、服务、环境及其所占百分比,第三句说明数据较小的两个对象:价格、其他及其所占百分比。

第二段可以进行原因列举,说明图表所反映的现象产生的原因。首句为主题句,承上启下进行过渡。其次进行具体论证,说明两至三点原因。最后一句可以进行小结,也可以不写。

本题第二点提纲应该放在第三段,图表作文第三段一般有三种写法:第一种写法是预测趋势,正面继续、负面变化。本图为正面现象,这个趋势将会继续,在不远的将来某市消费者将继续关注特色、服务和环境,而不是价格或其他。第二种写法是归纳结论,对本文进行简单总结即可。第三种写法是建议措施,可以提出两点相关建议。

本题也再次提醒广大考生:不要寄希望于临考前所谓的绝密押题或万能模板,扎扎实实提高写作实力,背诵、默写经典范文,才是取得写作高分的关键!

经典范文060

The pie chart above clearly reveals the factors of consumers’ concern on choosing restaurants in a certain city in 2017. Among all the five categories, the percentages of feature, service and environment are the highest, accounting for 36.3%, 26.8% and 23.8% respectively. On the contrary, the statistics of price and other factors take up merely 8.4% and 4.7% respectively, the lowest among the five groups.

Several primary causes that contribute to the above-mentioned phenomenon could be summarized as follows. In the first place, with the prosperity of economy in China and the increase of people’s income in recent decades, a large number of people are paying more attention to the features of a restaurant instead of prices. In the second place, in a bid to develop interpersonal relationship and enjoy comfortable life, consumers in mounting numbers prefer service and environment to other factors.

With due consideration of all these contributors, we may predict that with the speedy development of our society, customers in expanding numbers will attach utmost significance to the feature, service as well as environment of a restaurant rather than prices or other factors.



参考译文

上述饼状图清晰揭示了2017年某市消费者选择餐厅时关注的因素。在所有五组数据中,特色、服务、环境的百分比是最高的,分别占36.3%,26.8%和23.8%。相反,价格和其他因素的数据只占8.4%和4.7%,在这五组中是最低的。

造成上述现象的主要原因可以概括如下。首先,随着中国经济的繁荣和近几十年来人们收入的增加,很多人越来越关注餐厅的特色,而不是价格。其次,为了拓展人际关系,享受舒适的生活,越来越多的消费者选择服务与环境而非其他。

考虑到所有这些因素,我们可以预计,随着社会的迅速发展,越来越多的消费者将更加重视餐厅的特色、服务、环境,而不是价格或其他因素。





五 教育文化类:职业选择(2013年英语(一)真题改革版)

Directions: Write an essay based on the following chart, in which you should

1) describe the chart briefly, and

2) give your comments.

You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

您毕业后的打算是什么?



经典范文061

The column chart above reflects what college graduates plan to do after graduation. As can be seen from the diagram, 35.20% of undergraduates plan to take the civil servants examination, and 31.90% of them plan to take the test for graduate students, each accounting for approximately a third of the total.

When making this decision, students should consider a variety of factors, including their career plans, financial status and personal preferences. The first factor that undergraduate students should consider when deciding between postgraduate studies and work is their intended career. Students should do the necessary research to find out whether, and to what extent, job prospects for their intended line of work would improve with a postgraduate education. The second factor that students deciding between postgraduate education and employment should take into account is their financial situation. Scholarships, bursaries and loans may be available to some students, and these should also be taken into consideration when assessing whether one has ability to bear the costs of graduate studies. The final factor that undergraduate students should consider when deliberating between work and further education is their own personal preferences. These individual preferences should be given due consideration as students approach the end of their undergraduate education.

Generally speaking, by taking career goals, financial status and personal preferences into consideration, students can improve their chances of making an optimal choice.



参考译文

上述柱状图揭示了大学毕业生毕业之后打算做什么。如图表所示,35.20%的大学生计划考公务员,31.90%的大学生计划考研或考博,各占总数的大约三分之一。

在做决定的时候,学生应该考虑很多因素,包括职业规划、经济状况以及个人偏好。大学生在决定读研还是工作时,第一个应该考虑的因素就是自己期望的职业。大学生应该详细调查一下研究生学历能否及能在多大程度上有助于自己预期行业的职业发展。大学生在决定要读研还是工作时,第二个要考虑的因素就是自己的经济条件。有些学生可以申请奖学金、助学金以及贷款,在衡量自己是否有能力支付学费时,这些也可以考虑进去。大学生在读研还是工作两者之间权衡所需要考虑的最后一个因素就是自己的个人偏好。大学生们在毕业之际要适当考虑个人的喜好。

总而言之,通过综合考虑职业目标、经济状况及个人的偏好,大学生就更有可能在就业和继续深造之间做出最优选择。





六 教育文化类:大学扩招(2006年MBA真题)

Directions: Write an essay based on the following chart. In your essay, you should

1) interpret the chart, and

2) give your comments.

You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.



1998-2004年全国工程硕士招生录取人数

工程硕士:Master of Engineering

经典范文062

The diagram above clearly illustrates that a dramatic increase has occurred in the recruitment of Masters of Engineering (ME) in China during the past seven years. According to the statistics given above, we may conclude that the recruitment of MEs was on a steady rise from 1998 to 2004. In 1998, the number was at a low of only about 2,500. Surprisingly, it reached more than 35,000 in 2004, within no more than seven years.

Some driving factors that contribute to the above-mentioned change may be summarized as follows. First and foremost, China has become particularly active in manufacturing, which has led to an increased demand for qualified engineers. In addition, the development of the job market on the whole cannot keep pace with the expansion of college graduates, which has obliged a large number of students to stay on campus for another three years to get better prepared for their careers. Last but not least, working pressure is another reason. Taking all these factors into account, we may predict that with the speedy development of our society, the recruitment of MEs will keep growing in the forthcoming decade.

On the other side of the coin, however, this tendency may bring about a good many problems, such as the waste of talent. It is necessary for us to take effective measures to ensure this situation doesn’t get out of hand, and encourage students to choose majors for which both theoretical knowledge and practical skills will be demanded in the job market.



参考译文

上述图表清楚地揭示了过去七年中国的工程硕士招生录取人数急剧增长。根据上面给出的数据,我们可以得出结论:从1998到2004年,工程硕士招生录取人数稳步增长。1998年,招生人数较少,只有大约2500人。令人惊讶的是,到2004年招生人数在不到七年的时间里达到3.5万人以上。

促成上述变化的一些主要原因可以概括如下。首先,中国在制造业方面变得异常活跃,这使得对高素质工程师的需求增长。此外,就业市场的总体发展无法跟上大学毕业生人数的增加,这促使很多学生在校园里再待三年时间,为就业做更好的准备。最后,工作压力是另外一个原因。考虑到所有这些因素,我们可以预计,随着社会的迅速发展,工程硕士的招生人数在未来十年将会继续增加。

然而,问题的另一方面,这种趋势可能带来很多问题,例如人才的浪费。我们必须采取有效措施确保这一状况不会失控,同时鼓励学生选择那些就业市场上需要的既有理论知识又有实践技能的专业。





七 教育文化类:读书(2017年英语(一)真题改革版)

Directions: Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should

1)interpret the chart, and

2)give your comments.

You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)



2013年世界各国人均年阅读量统计图

经典范文063

The column chart above reveals clearly the statistics of reading quantity per person in seven countries in 2013. Based upon the data, the reading volumes in the U.S., Israel and Russia are highest among the seven nations, accounting for 56, 44 and 42 books per person respectively. On the contrary, those in Korea and China are lowest, taking up merely 11 and 4 books.

This tendency is rather disturbing, for reading extensively is no less necessary to one’s mental life than fresh air is to one’s physical life. From reading extensively, we can derive companionship, experience and instruction. First and foremost, a good book is our faithful friend. It can increase our contentment when we are cheerful and happy, and lessen our pain when we are sad or lonely. Furthermore, reading extensively can also offer us a wide range of experiences. Few of us can travel far from home or live long over one hundred, but all of us can live many different lives through the pages of books. Last but not least, reading extensively can increase our intellectual ability, broaden our minds and make us wise.

Though with the advent of TV, cellphone and the Internet, books are no longer read as extensively as they once were, nothing can replace the role that reading extensively plays in our lives.



参考译文

上述柱状图清晰地揭示了2013年七个国家人均阅读量的统计结果。根据这一统计数据,美国、以色列和俄罗斯的阅读量在七个国家中最高,分别为56本,44本和42本。相反,韩国和中国的阅读量最低,只有11本和4本。

这种倾向相当令人担忧,因为我们应该知道,多读书对人的精神生活而言,犹如新鲜空气对人的身体,同样是十分必需的。从读书中我们可以收获友谊,获得经验,受到教益。首要的是,一本好书就是我们忠实的朋友。当我们开心和快乐时,书能增加我们的满足感;当我们伤心或孤独时,书能减轻我们的痛苦。而且,读书还能为我们提供各种经历。我们中很少有人能到离家很远的地方去旅行,或者活过一百岁,但是通过读书我们都能经历很多种不同的生活。最后但同样重要的是,读书能增加我们的知识技能,开阔我们的眼界,使我们变得有智慧。

虽然随着电视、手机和网络的出现,读书的人没有以前多了,但没有什么东西可以取代读书在我们生活中的作用。





八 社会热点类:健康(1996年考研真题改革版)

Directions: Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should

1)interpret the chart, and

2)give your comments.

You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.



2014-2016某市体育馆数量及锻炼人数

经典范文064

The line chart above illustrates clearly the amount of gymnasiums and people doing exercises in a certain city between 2014 and 2016. As is revealed in the graph, the statistics of people doing exercises has been on a steady rise, from one million to nearly two million, while the number of gyms has increased considerably from 600 to about 860, a rise of about 260.

Several factors could contribute to this tendency. In the first place, with the quickening pace and ever-increasing pressure of urban life, people in growing numbers are suffering either physical or mental problems. Thus, gymnasiums in mounting numbers have been built by concerned departments. In the second place, the desire for health is universal. Accordingly, people variously choose jogging, playing basketball, swimming, skating, climbing or riding as their regular exercise because exercise never fails to make them stronger and more energetic.

As far as I am concerned, I have a peculiar interest in yoga as a form of exercise. An hour’s exercise every day usually makes me feel healthier and more vigorous. Besides, I never touch cigarettes or wine, nor do I stay up late. Instead, I keep a balanced diet and go to bed before 11 o’clock at night, because I believe burning the midnight oil is harmful to health. More importantly, an optimistic attitude toward life makes me confident and persistent. To sum up, all these practices guarantee a healthy body and a happy life.



参考译文

上述线状图清晰地显示了某市2014年至2016年体育馆的数量和锻炼人数。如该图所示,锻炼人数从一百万人稳步增加到近两百万人,同时,体育馆数量从600座急剧增加到约860座,增长了约260座。

几个因素促成了这一趋势。首先,随着都市生活节奏的加快和压力的不断增加,越来越多的人开始面临生理或心理问题。因此,相关部门建造了越来越多的体育馆。其次,对于健康的渴望很普遍。因此,人们各自选择慢跑、打篮球、游泳、滑冰、爬山或骑车作为日常锻炼方式,因为这些运动总是使他们更强壮、更精力充沛。

就我而言,我对瑜伽这种锻炼形式有特殊的兴趣。每天一小时的锻炼通常使我感到更健康而且更有活力。此外,我从不吸烟喝酒,也不熬夜。相反,我保持均衡饮食,而且晚上11点之前上床睡觉,因为我相信熬夜对健康有害。更为重要的是,对生活的乐观态度使我充满自信而且坚持不懈。总之,所有这些锻炼可以保证我有健康的体魄和快乐的生活。





九 社会热点类:人口老龄化(2005年考研真题改革版)

Directions: Write an essay based on the following chart. In your essay, you should

1) interpret the chart, and

2) give your comments.

You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

2000-2050年中国60岁以上的人口



资料来源:联合国

经典范文065

As can be seen from the mixed chart above, the population over 60 years old in China has increased markedly from 2000 and will continue to grow in the coming decades. From the statistics given in the diagram, we can estimate that there were 120 million aged people in 2000, accounting for about 10% of the total population, while the number will shoot up to 450 million in 2050, approximately 35% of the total.

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